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Dr. Love
04-18-2004, 03:57 AM
I have a pair of papers, on El Nino and on lightning.
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Sarge
04-24-2004, 06:14 PM
those images won't load for me...
NE169
04-30-2004, 12:39 AM
3 pages?
Awful short!!!
Mr Grimsdale
04-30-2004, 06:15 AM
Excellent!
A first class student. He'll go far.
Dr. Love
04-30-2004, 11:27 AM
Originally posted by NE169
3 pages?
Awful short!!!
Lightning will knock down the tree and knock down your soul.
"imagine fighting the power of the Gods with flashlight batteries - needless to say everyone died."
HOLY CRAP either you're following too closely to our trolling shenanigans in Flappos forum, or you were really destined for comedy and rock n roll, son..
I hate to think I had anything to do with this affair:
".. like all things Spanish, it is dangerous."
FUCKING TRUER WORDS have not been SAID, Doc~!!!!
"But waht of Zeus.. a Greek God throwing down lightning bolts to knock down trees and kill people, where did he find the time?"
Between TV commercials, Dr Love, everybody has a few minutes to get on with their bad selves and the things they gotta push outta their body..
Mr Grimsdale
04-30-2004, 01:39 PM
bleedin' spics
just pray the gypos don't cross the atlantic
flappo
04-30-2004, 05:22 PM
..jeremy levine?
..i thought you woz a ******
..not a fakkin yid too are ya ?
Dr Love gots balls to hand that shit it.. if he was my kid, I'd fucking
konk him on the noggin for that.
Dr. Love
05-02-2004, 08:08 PM
Thank you everyone for your support. Hopefully you aren't tall people. Just an update, I graduate on Saturday (May 8th).
I bet you're underappreciated for your overzealousness in edumacations.
I'm down witcha on dat flipside, yo.
knuckleboner
05-04-2004, 12:57 PM
in the 2nd paragraph in your essay on, "el nino," you had a fragment sentence, "Of the water." it needs a verb.
but other than that, it all looks pretty good to me.
excellent work, doc. very informative. i definitely learned a thing or 2.
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