The Show Your Work Thread

[ashstralia]

New version of I've Been Waiting!

Put another guitar track on, redid the backing vocals, and brought the piano up in the mix!

http://www.reverbnation.com/captastr...n-waiting-ver2

i'm envisioning less piano; more cowbell; and a children's choir.

oops! my producer got out.

[kwame k]

Ha! Brillant.......if I had any more tracks available I'd do it Ash

[jhale667]

Added a bass line to this since I wired and intonated (with a tuner!) my new bass build today.

Bubble Rhythm tracks by jhale667

[jhale667]

Dedicating this one to Team Butthurt.

TBH - the Intro by jhale667

[jhale667]

This one's almost done, need to decide whether to put a lead track on it or not...left a spot in the arrangement for one, but don't think it needs it... Added two tracks of bass tonight.

Home tracks rough by jhale667

[CDOG'S SOCK]

This one's almost done, need to decide whether to put a lead track on it or not...left a spot in the arrangement for one, but don't think it needs it... Added two tracks of bass tonight.



Home tracks rough by jhale667

Keep my offer to sing in mind, think sock puppet meets Roth!

[jhale667]

Hmm... in that case I already have a lyric in mind you can work on with the melody for the verse:


"Use me on you schvantz it's not gay...no - it's not gay (when you use a sock)
Use me on your hog it's not gay... no, I swear it's not gay (it's really not gay!)

I can't touch my own Kock
Cuz it would make me gay (really gay)
Don't know where I got this thought
But sock takes the guilt away (now it's 100% not gay!)

Yes I like to spank on my kock, but must have the barrier sock!


Guess I need to come up with two more verses...one about a couch and one about the "clique"? OR maybe I should just make the sock write 'em. Singers need to pull their own weight, after all.

[jhale667]

Dedicating this one to Team Butthurt.

TBH - the Intro by jhale667

I was thinking - this one needs vocal samples...like enlisting the female members of the RA to send me MP3s or Voice mails ranting about "Big Mean Meanies that hurt with mean words"...just a bunch of angry wimmens in the background adding to the tension-level of the track...it could work...

[Seshmeister]

I could do a little solo on it if you wish.

I could make it just a little out of time and slightly out of tune.

[Coyote]

Here's my old band... I still get royalties for these. (And no, I'm not in the video. Quit the band before the first EP in '08.)


Kinda proud of the lyrics in this one:

http://www.revengineband.com/Mp3/promoCD08/03-Revengine-From_human_to_animal.mp3

[jhale667]

I could do a little solo on it if you wish.

I could make it just a little out of time and slightly out of tune.

Y'know, that could actually be kinda funny... I could do a longer version of that, or another rhythm track -and everyone could put an intentionally cheesy 8-bar solo on it, send it to me as a .wav file and I could edit them all together... kind of a TBH "We're NOT stars".

[jhale667]

Re-did the bass line on this, came up with something a little more melodic.

Drunk n Horny 2013 by jhale667

[jhale667]

Fuck off, bitches!

Gone tracks by jhale667

[PETE'S BROTHER]

Fuck off, bitches!

Gone tracks by jhale667

Kwame sounds good, click tuner? j/k, sweet stuff

[jhale667]

Thanks. Yep, recorded to a click, and Peterson Stroboclip tuner used for all tracks... kinda like this one (which seems oddly appropriate lately):

I Hate You All! tracks by jhale667