What's the best song you have ever written?

[SweetSecrets]

The world is full of undiscovered musical geniouses. I bet the Army is full of em'! You know who you are! Reveal your creativeness here:

[SweetSecrets]

My most recent musical masterpiece is a collaborative piece, and it is still in construction at the moment. Panamark and I are working on it together over the phone. This is challenging, but it's possible. It is our song, and it just happens to fookin rock! (At least that's our bias opinion!) What's 9,000 miles to the magic of music? Hope you guys/gals will hear it one day.

Title: "Dream"
Key: A minor

[Loons The Great]

"What made Bob Marley Famous(Has Made A Loser Out Of Me)" by Loons the Great

Bring me Jack Daniel's when I'm thirsty
Bring me reefahs when I wants to get high

Bring me Jack Daniel's when I'm thirsty
Bring me reefahs when I wants to get high

Well, I'm gonn' get high juss as sho' as my name
Well, don't choo worry, 'cuz I ain't gonn' be messin' 'round with none of that cocaine

There shouldn't be no law if I wants to smoke a lil dope
'Cause it eases my troubled mind and it's good for ya don't choo know

An' if ya see me walkin' juss pass me by
Don't laugh at me 'cuz I might be high

Well reefah is fo' hippies, not for men
Doctor say it'll kill ya but he don't say when I say
Hey Hey Hey take a puff on me

[Coyote]

Did this Hanoi Rocks-type tune a couple of years ago back in high school, during one lazy class.

Title: "I Hope You Die"
Key: G major
Lyrics: misplaced

Needless to say, that one didn't pass initial approval amongst the band...

[Panamark]

Well Im most interested in the "Dream" at the moment,
very cool.. The main riff actually came from a Dream.
You guys ever have that ? You dream some music,
and if you wake at the right time, can grab a guitar,
and put it down, its usually good stuff..

Some past songs I was proud of (in the metal years)

Devils Hand
Lady Torture
Diamonds on the Horizon
Disturbed Child
Reggae Relevance (Smoke more Marijuana)
Children of the night
Tomorrow we Fall
Somebodies trying to Kill Rock and Roll.
Blackmailed
Stop pretending

There are more, Ive got ten albums worth !!!
YOU HEAR ME ED !!!!

[lms2]

You go with your ten albums worth Panamark. Someone needs to show that f*cker how its done.

Disturbed Child might be a good child band name?

[SweetSecrets]

I wrote another one entiled,

"September Tears"

I wrote it on 9/11/2001.

Anybody else write some pretty damn good music on that date?

[turboblues]

Originally posted by SweetSecrets
My most recent musical masterpiece is a collaborative piece, and it is still in construction at the moment. Panamark and I are working on it together over the phone. This is challenging, but it's possible. It is our song, and it just happens to fookin rock! (At least that's our bias opinion!) What's 9,000 miles to the magic of music? Hope you guys/gals will hear it one day.

Title: "Dream"
Key: A minor

I hope it won't be a cheesy Van Hagar style loveballad!

[HELLVIS]

OPEN UP YOUR EYES


Ya know, a lot of people like to look
at this world of ours through rose colored-glasses.

Well I've tried that before, and all I ever saw was
a rose-colored world full of pain, sufferin', and lies.

Open up your eyes!
And if you see somethin' you don't like,
don't just talk about it. Do somethin' to change it.

Won't ya stop your talkin'
'fore ya got me walkin'
headed right for the door
Think it's time that you quit
sellin' all your bullshit
Don't think I can take any more

All your lip service
won't serve no purpose
baby open up your eyes
If you took some action
stopped your jaws a flappin'
honey, you would be surprised

Open up your eyes
see this world ain't such a wonderful place
If you want to be a fat cat
don't get caught in no silly rat race
Brain-wash backward teachers,
sick-rich T.V. preachers, disgrace
Open up your eyes
see this world ain't such a wonderful place

Tell ya what ya can do
take a look around you
'fore you get a slap in the face
If you want to change shit
got to re-arrange it
Deal and cards fall into their place

Things will start to happen
if ya stop your rappin'
Come on, open up your eyes
May win or you may lose
beggars never can choose
No one wins if no one tries

Open up you eyes
see this world ain't such a wonderful place
If you want to be a fat cat
don't get caught in no silly rat race
Brain-wash backward teachers,
sick-rich T.V. preachers, disgrace
Open up your eyes
see this world ain't such a wonderful place

An' with all talk and no action
nuthin's ever gonna change...

[pete]

Originally posted by SweetSecrets


I wrote it on 9/11/2001.

It Happens All The Time

written 09/11 - production still in progress

[Big Troubles]

PETE! I missed ya man. Hope all is well. Max passed on the news, and I thought about you all day. (in a very, VERY erotic way) Good to see you made it out of that storm ok. Sorry about the other news. Gonna be alright?

[pete]

I'm fine.

thanks.

[Big Troubles]

well I just wanted to touch base with ya anyways. Im glad you are fine.

[Panamark]

Originally posted by turboblues
I hope it won't be a cheesy Van Hagar style loveballad!

Geez, I thought my reputation would preceed me.. No way !!
So far its a lot of classic stringwork, more in the Led Zep vein of things.
Cheesy songs is something that I wont be part of. I hope that makes
you feel better

Cheese Ballads Suck !!!!!

[saint]

I had a band in the late 80 typical hair-band, uptempo guitar based rock, we did a song called In and Out of love, Its about getting laid and when ever we played it live we kicked ass. We have a live recording of that song. The gig was aired on radio and the guitar players mother taped it on this old shitty tape recorder. The best song we did is a song called Dont Break My Heart where our keyboard player where really put to the test, he later became a very famous jazz musician and he has played with all big names in Sweden and Europe. I have digitalized them but they are in wav format and about 50Mb each and I dont know how to make them in to the mp3 format

[turboblues]

Originally posted by Panamark
Geez, I thought my reputation would preceed me.. No way !!
So far its a lot of classic stringwork, more in the Led Zep vein of things.
Cheesy songs is something that I wont be part of. I hope that makes
you feel better

Cheese Ballads Suck !!!!!

We all thank you, we can go back to normal life!

[Panamark]

Thanks mate !

[MAX]

Originally posted by pete
It Happens All The Time

written 09/11 - production still in progress

Beyond STELLAR!!!!!!

I love it dude. It sounds like the 70's but not dated and it has the same sort of a "Don't Cry" or "November Rain" vibe from G'NR. Regardless, I'm totally blown away.

I give it a fucking twenty out of ten!!!!

Post some more for me to download!!!! Please?

[MAX]

Hey Pete,

Look what I put underneath my avatar!!!!

[DLRdelight!]

Im not really good at wrtin songs, but one i like the most is

"All These Pretty Women"

all these pretty women
why do they play these games?
they know they got me locked in
im just waitin to be restrained
Actin like a fool
baby i got all the tools

all these pretty women
where did they all come from
begging for tomorrow
where one will finally come
is there any reason
i cannot get what's mine

all these pretty women
why do they run away?
just stranded all alone
cant even go back home
sitting watchin tv
so hard to kill the time
when will she come back?
no one really knows

Please give me comments cuz it really matters to me, what you guys think?

[SweetSecrets]

Panamark and me are writing a Stairway. Just wait.....you'll be hearing it.

[DLRdelight!]

Im lookin forward to it

[Panamark]

Me too