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  • SweetSecrets
    Sniper
    • Jun 2004
    • 924

    What's the best song you have ever written?

    The world is full of undiscovered musical geniouses. I bet the Army is full of em'! You know who you are! Reveal your creativeness here:
    Baby Pana due April 28th!

    I love Daddy Panamark! :0
  • SweetSecrets
    Sniper
    • Jun 2004
    • 924

    #2
    My most recent musical masterpiece is a collaborative piece, and it is still in construction at the moment. Panamark and I are working on it together over the phone. This is challenging, but it's possible. It is our song, and it just happens to fookin rock! (At least that's our bias opinion!) What's 9,000 miles to the magic of music? Hope you guys/gals will hear it one day.

    Title: "Dream"
    Key: A minor
    Baby Pana due April 28th!

    I love Daddy Panamark! :0

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    • Loons The Great

      #3
      "What made Bob Marley Famous(Has Made A Loser Out Of Me)" by Loons the Great

      Bring me Jack Daniel's when I'm thirsty
      Bring me reefahs when I wants to get high

      Bring me Jack Daniel's when I'm thirsty
      Bring me reefahs when I wants to get high

      Well, I'm gonn' get high juss as sho' as my name
      Well, don't choo worry, 'cuz I ain't gonn' be messin' 'round with none of that cocaine

      There shouldn't be no law if I wants to smoke a lil dope
      'Cause it eases my troubled mind and it's good for ya don't choo know

      An' if ya see me walkin' juss pass me by
      Don't laugh at me 'cuz I might be high

      Well reefah is fo' hippies, not for men
      Doctor say it'll kill ya but he don't say when I say
      Hey Hey Hey take a puff on me

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      • Coyote
        ROTH ARMY SUPREME
        • Jan 2004
        • 8185

        #4
        Did this Hanoi Rocks-type tune a couple of years ago back in high school, during one lazy class.

        Title: "I Hope You Die"
        Key: G major
        Lyrics: misplaced

        Needless to say, that one didn't pass initial approval amongst the band...
        Why settle for something you have, if it's not as good as something you're out to get?

        Originally posted by Seshmeister
        It's like putting up a YouTube of Bach and playing Chopstix on your Bontempi...

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        • Panamark
          DIAMOND STATUS
          • Jan 2004
          • 17113

          #5
          Well Im most interested in the "Dream" at the moment,
          very cool.. The main riff actually came from a Dream.
          You guys ever have that ? You dream some music,
          and if you wake at the right time, can grab a guitar,
          and put it down, its usually good stuff..

          Some past songs I was proud of (in the metal years)

          Devils Hand
          Lady Torture
          Diamonds on the Horizon
          Disturbed Child
          Reggae Relevance (Smoke more Marijuana)
          Children of the night
          Tomorrow we Fall
          Somebodies trying to Kill Rock and Roll.
          Blackmailed
          Stop pretending

          There are more, Ive got ten albums worth !!!
          YOU HEAR ME ED !!!!
          BABY PANA 2 IS Coming !! All across the land, let the love and beer flow !
          Love ya Mary Frances!

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          • lms2

            #6
            You go with your ten albums worth Panamark. Someone needs to show that f*cker how its done.

            Disturbed Child might be a good child band name?

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            • SweetSecrets
              Sniper
              • Jun 2004
              • 924

              #7
              I wrote another one entiled,

              "September Tears"

              I wrote it on 9/11/2001.

              Anybody else write some pretty damn good music on that date?
              Baby Pana due April 28th!

              I love Daddy Panamark! :0

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              • turboblues

                #8
                Originally posted by SweetSecrets
                My most recent musical masterpiece is a collaborative piece, and it is still in construction at the moment. Panamark and I are working on it together over the phone. This is challenging, but it's possible. It is our song, and it just happens to fookin rock! (At least that's our bias opinion!) What's 9,000 miles to the magic of music? Hope you guys/gals will hear it one day.

                Title: "Dream"
                Key: A minor
                I hope it won't be a cheesy Van Hagar style loveballad!

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                • HELLVIS
                  Foot Soldier
                  • Jul 2004
                  • 542

                  #9
                  OPEN UP YOUR EYES


                  Ya know, a lot of people like to look
                  at this world of ours through rose colored-glasses.

                  Well I've tried that before, and all I ever saw was
                  a rose-colored world full of pain, sufferin', and lies.

                  Open up your eyes!
                  And if you see somethin' you don't like,
                  don't just talk about it. Do somethin' to change it.

                  Won't ya stop your talkin'
                  'fore ya got me walkin'
                  headed right for the door
                  Think it's time that you quit
                  sellin' all your bullshit
                  Don't think I can take any more

                  All your lip service
                  won't serve no purpose
                  baby open up your eyes
                  If you took some action
                  stopped your jaws a flappin'
                  honey, you would be surprised

                  Open up your eyes
                  see this world ain't such a wonderful place
                  If you want to be a fat cat
                  don't get caught in no silly rat race
                  Brain-wash backward teachers,
                  sick-rich T.V. preachers, disgrace
                  Open up your eyes
                  see this world ain't such a wonderful place

                  Tell ya what ya can do
                  take a look around you
                  'fore you get a slap in the face
                  If you want to change shit
                  got to re-arrange it
                  Deal and cards fall into their place

                  Things will start to happen
                  if ya stop your rappin'
                  Come on, open up your eyes
                  May win or you may lose
                  beggars never can choose
                  No one wins if no one tries

                  Open up you eyes
                  see this world ain't such a wonderful place
                  If you want to be a fat cat
                  don't get caught in no silly rat race
                  Brain-wash backward teachers,
                  sick-rich T.V. preachers, disgrace
                  Open up your eyes
                  see this world ain't such a wonderful place

                  An' with all talk and no action
                  nuthin's ever gonna change...
                  He throws a punch.
                  He swings. I duck.
                  His fat ass falls...
                  Hey Sammy,you still SUCK!

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                  • pete
                    Crazy Ass Mofo
                    • Jan 2004
                    • 3325

                    #10
                    Originally posted by SweetSecrets


                    I wrote it on 9/11/2001.

                    It Happens All The Time

                    written 09/11 - production still in progress

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                    • Big Troubles
                      ROTH ARMY SUPREME
                      • Feb 2004
                      • 8512

                      #11
                      PETE! I missed ya man. Hope all is well. Max passed on the news, and I thought about you all day. (in a very, VERY erotic way) Good to see you made it out of that storm ok. Sorry about the other news. Gonna be alright?
                      "FUCK YOU, YOU FUCKIN' BITCH! WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE ANYWAYS? TALK TO ME LIKE THAT? FUCK YOU. DRAG QUEEN LOOKIN' WHORE- YOU AINT SHIT. YOUR THE FRECKLE TO THE LEFT OF MY BROWN EYE. NOW GO MAKE YOURSELF USEFUL...OH, PUT DAD ON THE PHONE"

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                      • pete
                        Crazy Ass Mofo
                        • Jan 2004
                        • 3325

                        #12
                        I'm fine.

                        thanks.

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                        • Big Troubles
                          ROTH ARMY SUPREME
                          • Feb 2004
                          • 8512

                          #13
                          well I just wanted to touch base with ya anyways. Im glad you are fine.
                          "FUCK YOU, YOU FUCKIN' BITCH! WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE ANYWAYS? TALK TO ME LIKE THAT? FUCK YOU. DRAG QUEEN LOOKIN' WHORE- YOU AINT SHIT. YOUR THE FRECKLE TO THE LEFT OF MY BROWN EYE. NOW GO MAKE YOURSELF USEFUL...OH, PUT DAD ON THE PHONE"

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                          • Panamark
                            DIAMOND STATUS
                            • Jan 2004
                            • 17113

                            #14
                            Originally posted by turboblues
                            I hope it won't be a cheesy Van Hagar style loveballad!
                            Geez, I thought my reputation would preceed me.. No way !!
                            So far its a lot of classic stringwork, more in the Led Zep vein of things.
                            Cheesy songs is something that I wont be part of. I hope that makes
                            you feel better

                            Cheese Ballads Suck !!!!!
                            BABY PANA 2 IS Coming !! All across the land, let the love and beer flow !
                            Love ya Mary Frances!

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                            • saint
                              Foot Soldier
                              • Feb 2004
                              • 688

                              #15
                              I had a band in the late 80 typical hair-band, uptempo guitar based rock, we did a song called In and Out of love, Its about getting laid and when ever we played it live we kicked ass. We have a live recording of that song. The gig was aired on radio and the guitar players mother taped it on this old shitty tape recorder. The best song we did is a song called Dont Break My Heart where our keyboard player where really put to the test, he later became a very famous jazz musician and he has played with all big names in Sweden and Europe. I have digitalized them but they are in wav format and about 50Mb each and I dont know how to make them in to the mp3 format
                              http://web.telia.com/~u55014187/kor.gif

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