Original song inspired by Little Guitars

[Plexi Head]

Hey sorry if this is in the wrong thread. I have just finished recording an original song on the home computer and I ripped the groove off Little Guitars. Feedback is wanted because I want to improve so flame away. I allready know I can't sing.

The song is called Image Problem and you can hear it at

http://www.myspace.com/jamesdamon

[DrMaddVibe]

Ok...here goes.

I liked it.

The only thing I would've liked to hear is more cowbell. Naw, really...it would've been nice to hear the guitar out in front more. Bass drum...double kicks..with some snare. I didn't have a problem with the vocal...could've used bassplayer in the background doing his..."Oooooooohhhh" and "Aaaaaaaaaahhh"'s.

Rock on.

[Dave's Bitch]

i really like it,lol im sat here singing it,*sings*hey baby i think you got an image problem,your making love but you dont believe it,hehe.i like the vocals i think they suit all the music.i would like to hear a bit of bass drum like DrMaddVibe said,the drums are there but there not like THERE,if you get me.over all i think its a really good song :)

i think its so cool that theres people on here making there own music inspired by DLR

its a good song

[Dave's Bitch]

shit i forgot to say,some soft backing vocals at parts would add to it alot

[Plexi Head]

Thanks so much for the comments. I have posted this song at a few song forums and just got back shit responses like " You need to EQ the vocal minus 3dB on the low mids..." Fuck Off wanker.

The comments you guys have posted are constructive and helpful.

THANKYOU it means alot.

[ELVIS]

Yeah, but now, Dave looks like Elvis Costello...

Hey, I like it!

I'm not gonna critique the mix...

I like loud guitars...

So...

Crank up the guitars...

Good guitar playing, by the way...

Me likes...


:elvis:

[Plexi Head]

I cranked the guitars up a bit. Have to watch the faders going into tha red

[ELVIS]

Well, lower the rest of the crap...


:elvis:

[Plexi Head]

Originally posted by ELVIS
Well, lower the rest of the crap...


:elvis:

Thanks for technical expertise Elvis.

I will lower the rest of the crap.

[Plexi Head]

By the way Elvis, that was not a smart arse reply, I pissed myself laughing when I read that.

You know what? It makes total sense.

[ELVIS]

My words are carefully chosen...;)


:elvis: