Original song inspired by Little Guitars

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  • Plexi Head
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    • May 2005
    • 395
    #1

    Original song inspired by Little Guitars

    Hey sorry if this is in the wrong thread. I have just finished recording an original song on the home computer and I ripped the groove off Little Guitars. Feedback is wanted because I want to improve so flame away. I allready know I can't sing.

    The song is called Image Problem and you can hear it at

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    "One mouthful of you will rot every tooth in my mouth you little sugar"
    Tags: guitars, inspired, original, song
    • DrMaddVibe
      ROTH ARMY ELITE
      • Jan 2004
      • 6682
      #2
      Ok...here goes.

      I liked it.

      The only thing I would've liked to hear is more cowbell. Naw, really...it would've been nice to hear the guitar out in front more. Bass drum...double kicks..with some snare. I didn't have a problem with the vocal...could've used bassplayer in the background doing his..."Oooooooohhhh" and "Aaaaaaaaaahhh"'s.

      Rock on.
      http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x...auders1zl5.gif
      http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c4...willywonka.gif

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        • Dave's Bitch
          ROCKSTAR

          • Apr 2005
          • 5291
          #3
          i really like it,lol im sat here singing it,*sings*hey baby i think you got an image problem,your making love but you dont believe it,hehe.i like the vocals i think they suit all the music.i would like to hear a bit of bass drum like DrMaddVibe said,the drums are there but there not like THERE,if you get me.over all i think its a really good song

          i think its so cool that theres people on here making there own music inspired by DLR

          its a good song
          I really love you baby, I love what you've got
          Let's get together we can, Get hot

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            • Dave's Bitch
              ROCKSTAR

              • Apr 2005
              • 5291
              #4
              shit i forgot to say,some soft backing vocals at parts would add to it alot
              I really love you baby, I love what you've got
              Let's get together we can, Get hot

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                • Plexi Head
                  Head Fluffer
                  • May 2005
                  • 395
                  #5
                  Thanks so much for the comments. I have posted this song at a few song forums and just got back shit responses like " You need to EQ the vocal minus 3dB on the low mids..." Fuck Off wanker.

                  The comments you guys have posted are constructive and helpful.

                  THANKYOU it means alot.
                  "One mouthful of you will rot every tooth in my mouth you little sugar"

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                    • ELVIS
                      Banned
                      • Dec 2003
                      • 44120
                      #6
                      Yeah, but now, Dave looks like Elvis Costello...

                      Hey, I like it!

                      I'm not gonna critique the mix...

                      I like loud guitars...

                      So...

                      Crank up the guitars...

                      Good guitar playing, by the way...

                      Me likes...


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                        • Plexi Head
                          Head Fluffer
                          • May 2005
                          • 395
                          #7
                          I cranked the guitars up a bit. Have to watch the faders going into tha red
                          "One mouthful of you will rot every tooth in my mouth you little sugar"

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                            • ELVIS
                              Banned
                              • Dec 2003
                              • 44120
                              #8
                              Well, lower the rest of the crap...


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                                • Plexi Head
                                  Head Fluffer
                                  • May 2005
                                  • 395
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by ELVIS
                                  Well, lower the rest of the crap...
                                  Thanks for technical expertise Elvis.

                                  I will lower the rest of the crap.
                                  "One mouthful of you will rot every tooth in my mouth you little sugar"

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                                    • Plexi Head
                                      Head Fluffer
                                      • May 2005
                                      • 395
                                      #10
                                      By the way Elvis, that was not a smart arse reply, I pissed myself laughing when I read that.

                                      You know what? It makes total sense.
                                      "One mouthful of you will rot every tooth in my mouth you little sugar"

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                                        • ELVIS
                                          Banned
                                          • Dec 2003
                                          • 44120
                                          #11
                                          My words are carefully chosen...


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