The Show Your Work Thread

[DLR Bridge]

Mixing the blatant T&A in with the politics could come across as incredibly sexist to some people.

"What's wrong with being sexy?" - Nigel Tuffnel

[ELVIS]

The audience ??

[Hardrock69]

Mixing the blatant T&A in with the politics could come across as incredibly sexist to some people.

I think you need to at least choose to do one at a time otherwise it looks like you have a message but you think the audience is so dumb they will only read it if you use images of women to sell it.

Oh? So what is this? A "kinder, gentler, more PC Roth Army?"


Would you and Elvira rather see a video with a bunch of young rent boys in it?

Don't be ridiculous. So he put a bunch of half-naked bitches in the video.

He is producing a lot more than either of you lot.......


And Elbow....


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Mindless idiot

[Seshmeister]

I wasn't complaining about the half naked bitches, I was just saying it was incongruous to stick them through a liberal political campaign video.

It's not important and as you say it's not fair to judge a hobbyist video harshly but it was so flawed I thought it was worth mentioning.

[DLR Bridge]

Then the only comment is from fail himself...

"And what?!?"

Dude, seriously...

Unstick yourself from yourself and buy this book...



It will help...

Or... dude, seriously, go to the very first page of this thread and see how it's done. You post some work you've done and in return, get some kind words of constructive criticism. A win win situation for all involved. There was no name calling and shit talking for the first 3 years. Why is there now? Some things about this place I'll never get. Isn't making and listening to music supposed to be fun?

[ELVIS]

I blame Edwad...

[ashstralia]

Ok, here's my take. I've put some of my stuff in this excellent thread. I frankly couldn't care less if anyone listened to it, or even liked it. Because as Bridge said, making and listening to music is supposed to be fun! And to me it is. I love listening to what all of you create, it's like a little vignette into a secret world or something.

As a lifelong fan of music, and a professional, (two of my incomes involve performing and teaching music) I feel qualified to comment and critique.

J, if I was your producer, I'd ask you 'why spend all this time and $ chasing ultimate tone if you're just gonna barrage me with a blur of digital 64th notes? Like on that Vai album. We know you can play! Show me a toneful tuneful melody!'

I know you will..

[ELVIS]

Correction...

Digital tone...

Ultimate tone is out of his fortune 500 price range...

[ashstralia]

Any hidden microphones ??

Sadly no, those things are worth heaps on the black market. You got any?

[ELVIS]

Quite a few...

[Hardrock69]

If his husband found out Smelvis has been secretly videotaping them sucking each other off, Smelvis would be gator food in no time.

[jhale667]

I wasn't complaining about the half naked bitches,

Nope, just complaining for the sake of complaining, clearly.

it's not fair to judge a hobbyist video harshly but

But you just couldn't resist!


Not to worry, there'll be no confusing political imagery in the next one... Though I'm sure you and swamp thing will have to find something to find fault with...

[ELVIS]

[ashstralia]

I should mention this here...

I did my 13/14 tax return this week, our eofy is 30/6. Or 6/30 if you're stateside.

I managed to accrue 18k in deductions from my 'hobby'!

Hehehe....

[lesfunk]

This is from last thursday.