Please proofread my term paper

[Dr. Love]

I have a pair of papers, on El Nino and on lightning.

[Sarge]

those images won't load for me...

[NE169]

3 pages?

Awful short!!!

[Mr Grimsdale]

Excellent!

A first class student. He'll go far.

[Dr. Love]

Originally posted by NE169
3 pages?

Awful short!!!

Lightning will knock down the tree and knock down your soul.

[GAR]

"imagine fighting the power of the Gods with flashlight batteries - needless to say everyone died."

HOLY CRAP either you're following too closely to our trolling shenanigans in Flappos forum, or you were really destined for comedy and rock n roll, son..

I hate to think I had anything to do with this affair:

".. like all things Spanish, it is dangerous."

FUCKING TRUER WORDS have not been SAID, Doc~!!!!

[GAR]

"But waht of Zeus.. a Greek God throwing down lightning bolts to knock down trees and kill people, where did he find the time?"

Between TV commercials, Dr Love, everybody has a few minutes to get on with their bad selves and the things they gotta push outta their body..

[Mr Grimsdale]

bleedin' spics

just pray the gypos don't cross the atlantic

[flappo]

..jeremy levine?

..i thought you woz a ******

..not a fakkin yid too are ya ?

[GAR]

Dr Love gots balls to hand that shit it.. if he was my kid, I'd fucking
konk him on the noggin for that.

[Dr. Love]

Thank you everyone for your support. Hopefully you aren't tall people. Just an update, I graduate on Saturday (May 8th).

[GAR]

I bet you're underappreciated for your overzealousness in edumacations.

I'm down witcha on dat flipside, yo.

[knuckleboner]

in the 2nd paragraph in your essay on, "el nino," you had a fragment sentence, "Of the water." it needs a verb.

but other than that, it all looks pretty good to me.

excellent work, doc. very informative. i definitely learned a thing or 2.